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On May 15th this article was posted covering FanFiction.net: www.examiner.com/x-10163-Denver-Creative-Arts-Examiner~y2009m5d15-Fiction-isnt-enough-for-the-fans--FanFictionnet
In it, I link my personal favorite fan-fiction love scene between Edward and Bella, by "TrustYouToKillMe". There are three chapters, and it is racy. It is rated PG-16.
It's dated back before "Breaking Dawn" was released, so I imagine this was supposed to occur after "Eclipse". It seems to pick up right where they left off.
This fan fiction has Bella and Edward stealing a moment together a few days before their wedding. It's incredibly romantic and well written, with forty-nine rave reviews.
It's a creative art to write, and even more of an art to write in someone else's tone and voice. I figured all of you would appreciate a little bit of fun today.
Here it is, called "Bella's End of the Bargain":
It was three days before our wedding, and I was a mess.
Alice was everywhere it seemed, fixing my dress, talking about flowers, asking me random questions that I had no answer for.
"You like Billy Joel, right?"
"Which color do you prefer, Pink Blush or Bashful Rose?"
And occasionally she would get that look in her eyes, then laugh hysterically alongside Edward. I could always tell when it was about me, because he would reach out and pull me closer, laughing into my hair. This worked, of course, and he knew it. I could never be angry with him when he was that close.
So when Alice posed this next question, I was more than taken by surprise.
"Bella, how would you feel about spending some alone time with Edward?"
I looked up from the ribbons suspiciously. She'd dragged me over to help choose a color scheme, though I couldn't understand why. She would know the answer before she even asked. Again, this is why I was suspicious. And blushing.
"Uh, what about it?" I asked, fumbling with the pink satin.
"Just an idea. I could get Charlie out of the way for you."
I had to laugh at the notion. What could she possibly do with Charlie that would keep him all night? Kidnap him?
The idea rang a bell, and I wondered if this was all Edward's plan.
My mind wandered to him.
If this was his plan...
I began to blush as if Alice could somehow read my thoughts. Overwhelmed, I just shrugged.
"Sure, I'd love to have a night alone. If you can get Charlie out of the way, that'd be great."
She smiled, she already knew, but she was gracious about it anyhow.
It occured to me it might be simpler just to ask the Cullen's... but the thought of actually ASKING them to give us the house for the night...
I blushed Bashful Rose.
I had to hand it to the girl. She was sneakier than I had thought. Charlie hadn't had the time to even become suspicious, because after dinner that night, Alice suddenly raced into our living room.
"Charlie!"
"What?" he asked, jumping. He looked to me, but I shrugged.
"Your tux! They've completely lost your tux!"
He frowned.
"But it's in my closet."
I couldn't bear to look at him.
"No, I sent it to the dry cleaners, but they've lost it, and now we have to get you a new one! Right now!"
She yanked on his hand and he tried to plant his feet.
"Wait, wait, now? Where are we going?"
"There's a shop in Seattle, and I know the owner. We've got to get there before he thinks we've stood him up!"
"But I can't leave Bella - "
"She will be fine. She's eighteen. And she'll be living on her own pretty soon, you know."
Charlie's entire body seemed to droop at the idea. He turned to look at me.
"You'll be alright for a while?"
I knew she would make sure to keep him so long, he'd have to spend the night somewhere. But I wasn't going to let on.
"Sure. Don't worry Charlie."
He seemed wary of my answer, but before he could protest anymore, she had dragged him out the front door. I laughed when I realized he still had his beer in his other hand.
The TV was muted and the sudden silence filled the room. Oh my god.
Edward would be here. And I would finally...
I stood up. I couldn't be wearing this ratty t-shirt and sweatpants when he got here. But I had to be fast.
I dashed up the stairs and had the shirt off before I'd reached the top. I threw open my door and pulled the sweatpants off. I stood up, the clothes bundled in my hands, and proceeded to drop them on the floor.
Edward was standing across the room, his face in utter shock.
I couldn't move. This was not exactly the seduction I was planning for.
His beautiful marble self was now truly a statue. He didn't move, and neither did I.
Finally he broke into a grin. Then he laughed. He began guffawing like an old man, leaning over and bracing himself against my bed.
"Edward, it's not funny!" I whined and darted into my closet for something to at least cover myself. I grabbed a black v-neck tee, shrunken enough that it fit my body perfectly, but long enough that it hung lightly over my rear. I pulled it on and ran my fingers through my hair.
Stepping out of the closet, I looked for him.
He was sitting on the bed, still giggling to himself.
Ugh. I want to die right now. I am so not sexy.
He looked up at me as I walked into view, and he stopped laughing.
I knew he could hear my heart stop.
"Bella, come here."
I did as I was told. I crawled forward and sat next to him on my bed, like I had so many times before. He pulled me against him and we laid back, nestled together. I loved lying in the nook of his arm. I ran my hand down his chest and took in his unbelievable smell. I could feel him playing with my hair.
"You're so beautiful. Sometimes I can hardly stand it." he whispered and I shuddered. How wrong he'd gotten it, but I decided for once not to correct him. I basked in the glow of his adoration and tried not to think about what would happen next...
Continue reading it at: www.fanfiction.net/s/4303955/1/Bellas_End_of_the_Bargain_Part_1
Hope you enjoy! There are plenty of other great fan-fictions out there, and if you email me ones that you've found that are excellent, I will write an article about them. My email is in my bio on this site.
Thank you for reading and have a great day!
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